This poem was well written. I liked how it flowed and I also enjoyed its comparisons and how the whole poem related to the title. Great job.

I'm sorry to say.
But this poem seemed to go on
And on.
Although it wasn't that long.
It seemed as though it was.
Maybe it's just
One poem, though.
I'll go check on the others, hmmkay?

Keep up the good work, 5/5

Hi, thanks for ur comment on my poem. Awesome poem by the way. The words collaborated so wonderfully and it was very vivid in detail. great job. 5/5

~K3!$3Y~

Beautiful poem...
keep on...

*isabel*