Oh well done. i love this poem. the way its set out is so different then the rest. i love how its a story too. the young girl knowing that he does not love her. yet she loves him.

excellent. 5/5 David

Very good poem goran, such sad feelings in it, but the symbolism is great, another wondeful poem from you, keep it up!!! another 5/5!!!

Awww thats so cute i like this one. i vote this a 5/5 just like the others that you write. i like the last verse its sad.

Jeesh, write from a quote and it's still amazing! 5/5 for the best poet on here!

WOW that is wat i do when i think about someone n find out if he loves me. but i wont do that anymore.Well i loved it nice dast xosh! =]

Hello
oh my god, goran i loved this one, i t hink its my favorite,,,,it is so beatiful
u are the best, i have no suggestion to how u could have made it better accept that it is perfect..........

Short but sweet and very cute.

This is a beautiful story in a poem format. It was short but it was really nice. 5/5

Kalee

Great poem. I loved it. very good. 5/5
take care!

~Chelsea

Wow, I loved this. You are a talented writter. The flow was outstanding as well as the strucutre. The words you used and the way you used them was fantastic. Amazing write. Keep up the Excellent work.

Peace, Joe

Hey really pretty poem really liked it! congrats!

U are a fabulous poet...this was another great by u...it made me smile for some reason..idk y but it did...hmm..

This is such a cute little poem! The whole, he loves me, he loves me not quote just really drives people to write a poem about that. YOu did an awesome job! God Bless 5/5
<3Tayy

This is such a cute little poem! The whole, he loves me, he loves me not quote just really drives people to write a poem about that. YOu did an awesome job! God Bless 5/5
<3Tayy

I love it its short sweet and................sweet. its awesome the message the words the everything its beautiful keep up th great work

Awww that makes me want to cry =[ it was beautiful and at the same time heartbreaking

brittany (MD)

This poem here made me cry ^.^ lol

I thought this was really good keep it up 5/5

That was really touching, keep it up.

Mannnn this poem was utterly excelent. your retort to her giving you a flower was awsome.
great work.
Tom.