Loving your poem! Keep up the great work!

Btw! Don't give in to them!

ANNNNNNDREAAAAAA!
I usually use big words to sound all smart
BUT I HAVE ABANDONED IT ALL
I frickkkkennn loved this poem
I hav tears in my eyes. See what uve done. Ur making me cry. Didnt i ever teach you anything little missy!? Perfection does not exist. Ur the closest thing that I could ever find to perfect. Ilyyyyyyyy! veryveryveryveryveryMUCH
xxxx

Omg.. i so get it.. it's so depressing but so many people feel this way! BRAVA

Awesome poem keep it up ill look forward to your next poem

Wow this is really deep!! I really like it. It definately captures the way a lot of girls feel these days, including myself.

This poem is really great. i love the emotion you put into it, and how you write a poem lots of ppl can relate to! good work.

*Thanks for the comment!

- stacy. =]

Wow so deep so BEAUDIFUL awesome job 5/5 def! cynthia m. X]

Damn, never mind me your a great writer lol thank you very much for your comment, it's nice to get some recognition for the things i write about. this was GREAT!! by the way, i know a lot of girls who are in this same situation. i do my best to help open there eyes to the world in front of them and all the opportunities they can have and make for themselves instead of worrying about what others think about them. I've read some of your other poems and there very deep and great to read. 5/5 I'm a add you to my favorites, i haven't read any poems up until now that impressed me like this one. well thanks again for the comment. keep up your work pure and true, stay strong, keep your head up and pursue your goals with passion and don't let life slow you down...

~Infamous Woundz~ thats another alias i go by...lata

I loved this!!! amazing! =o]

Aww thats so sad

Thatwas amazing, deep, and sad. 5/5.

I really loved it, and I could relate to it as well, though maybe not to that extreme!
And it flowed really well, especially seeing as it doesn't rhyme.
Keep it up =]

Wonderful poem, yea ma poem is tru..

Great work

Damn... Tops mate! 10/10! Great use of words! Alot of emotion... and the story it tells really is a true one... that alot go through... and take that last stand of sorts. All in all... great write!

Wow! that's so WOW =P i will keep reading your poems n_n i loved your poem!

You feel
like a weed in a sea of roses

it's been much to cruel to you
so say goodnight for the last time
and prepare to be noticed for the first time

what a wonderful piece my friend
love it
my best wishes for such powerful pieces

your friend
Rohan
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If you get some time do read my new and old poems

Great poem.. nice story and meaning.. i can really relate 5/5 :)

Excelent poem i thout it was very emotional.5/5= )

Cory