Great collaboration
It sounded really well
I loved it so much
nice work once again
5/5

Wow that was brilliant! i loved the vocabulary definitely, really gave the poem it's depth, and the rest of the words and emotions gave it its warmth. beautiful 5/5

I totally wasn't expecting the ending, which was good to read. The vocab was so descriptive, it worked really effectively in this. A poem that most people can relate to. An enjoyable read. Well done. 5/5

Tammie

Good flow and this is a good poem
feeling is strong and full of emotion
great write

laura

Great work you two!

"I seize shelter in your whisper,
ranquility in your stunning smile"

I..wow...don't even know what to say about those lines there..its incredible, an amazing description of the things we can feel...if I had a third thumb, Id have to give three up..great work!

This is beautiful...the opening pulled me right into the poem and from there on each stanza just got better and better...word choice was a joy to read, as was the imagery you created...well done to both of you for creating such a pleasureable read.

Very nice poem... I love it! Keep up the good work! I'll be checking back later to read more now that your on my favorites :-)

This is an amazing poem. It is so beautiful. Really, I mean that. The rhyme and flow were perfect. 5/5

marcella

Good poem

Magnific! Estupende!

I love! I love! You weave the imagination into the ... foreverness of it?

Captivating and very beautiful poem. The descriptions were well thoughtout. The flow was pretty constant and the rhyming words weren't too plain. Excellent poem.