Welcome Spring

by debbylyn   Apr 7, 2007


April's resplendent
With showers of pain
Teardrops on daffodils
Windmills of rain

Endless May mourning
Blossoming screams
Hearts bleeding sunshine
Willows weep dreams

June welcomes Heaven
Immaculate shroud
Smiles from a rosebud
Laughs in a cloud

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    ......'laughs in a cloud'.........very sweet.....

  • 18 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    Very beautiful flow, intreging and influencial

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    "April's resplendent
    With showers of pain
    Teardrops on daffodils
    Windmills of rain"

    My fave stanza! The imagery was amazing, i loved the tear drop effect.
    Excellent nature poem sweets
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Wallace

    That is really deep, not sure i understood it completely but it had a good flow and sounded good to me. Very good poem.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 18 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Yes, this is a refreshing write. Let's hope the summer brings lots of laughter and joy for all of us. Let the sun brighten our days.

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