Very well done Ang. I could picture the clouds moving in and everything. I like this piece.

Magnifcently written well worded poem, the flow was smooth, stayed on track, all in all i thought it was a great read, keep up the good work.

Good job on this one chica. The entire flow with the drums was excellent.

HOLY MOLY!!! I'm not into many nature poems...I love nature but reading about doesn't always float my boat but you thrown down on some nature pieces!!! You and Sunny both capture the TRUE beauty of it portray it in a way where the reader is left begging for me!!!! This what poetry is all about!!! You have something I didn't know you had girl!!!! HAHAHA I've been away far too long!!!! This is beautiful!!!!! From beginning to end and even after you captured my heart!!!!!! Awesome write!!!

HAHAHAHAHA I meant "begging for MORE" I'm so sorry...

This is beautiful!

"off in the distance
is softly heard
mother nature beating
upon the earth"
^^^I love this stanza! And the last stanza is pretty fantastic, too. Very nice piece!