Wow i found this poem to be really beautifully written it seems so sweet better love poem then i could ever write lol. The only thing i suggest is that you make the poems stanzas all the same length, have the same amount of lines in each stanza and it would make the poem flow better and look much neater. Other then that well done on a beautiful poem~mel

Love it
Its unique
your rhyme n rhythm were great
the words sang
it was just a great poem
all together
loved it...
5/5