Excellent work, I love your style and the good use of vocabulary, great work. 5/5

Hmmm, i dont think I am able enuf to judge u but i loved ur poem, tho i stil am tryin to understand it fully.

I really like your choice of words and the flow of this poem. I can not comment fully on its content due to a lact of time . I will ponder on its debth.

Amazing, short but really powerful. Excellent choice of words. 5/5