Magnifcently written well worded poem, the flow was smooth, stayed on track, all in all i thought it was a great read, keep up the good work. |
This was a great write! well explained! loved the second stanza- great imagery ( with the orchastra) i loved it.. was ratehr long.. but i loved every bit and it kept me reading to the end. great write!!!! |
by broken wings
Oh my god! i never knew someone who had similar dreams. i loved that poem. i think personally it was very well written. |
Dreams for you daydreams for me. alot like my life is placed right infront of me (in text form of course), i love it! |
by Kendall
Thanks to all for loving my sick mind |