In the morning

I think its great ur writing about sumthing that alot of people can relate to!!!

That's so sad, it feels like such a hopeless poem, as if their is no more hope for the poem, it was really beautiful, glad your doing allright,
5/5
gabriella

The days i felt the same way you did, you epressed this feeling well in a short amount of writting well done.

You have open some doors here thats scary but true, very deep and emotional writing. This have a powerful meaning continue doing your thing, it's all for the living right.

A very good opening couplet that led on nicely to the common yet chiling act that so many people carry out.
5/5
*Gem*