A great dark write.. shows the emopotions very well.. deep, yet short, great write! You had some good strong words in there! well done
kirsty
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I love this poem!
I likethe flow and it was nicely worded.
5/5

Loved it...dark but powerful..

Gd poem..not my type but i like

Short, but very well-written. Excellent job.
[tragic]

You as well are good writer keep it up.

Very chilling and deep. Emotional in fact. I loved it. I think you could've made it a little longer. Maybe more detail? I still liked reading it.
<3Raych

*thanks for commenting on my poem.

A very good opening couplet that led on nicely to the common yet chiling act that so many people carry out.
5/5
*Gem*

You have open some doors here thats scary but true, very deep and emotional writing. This have a powerful meaning continue doing your thing, it's all for the living right.

The days i felt the same way you did, you epressed this feeling well in a short amount of writting well done.

That's so sad, it feels like such a hopeless poem, as if their is no more hope for the poem, it was really beautiful, glad your doing allright,
5/5
gabriella

I think its great ur writing about sumthing that alot of people can relate to!!!