by The Queen of Spades Apr 7, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
In the corners of my mind |
by Melpomene
I liked this poem, I found the ryhme scheme to be off a little to tell you the truth like yeah you had a ryhme but it seemed to be ryhming in all different places not in one flow. I thought this poem was really sweet though with a beautiful meaning behing it. Well done none the less ~mel |
by skynerraw
Amazing job, great flow! 5/5! |
Beautiful piece of poetry... Truly amazing. |
by Curry
I love this poem! i gave it a 5/5. you did an amazing job writing it. |
by Kaila
Awww!!! this is so cute hun I loved it you did an excellent job and I just loved this write |