I love the rhyme scheme, and the idea of the poem. Great concept!

Awww!!! this is so cute hun I loved it you did an excellent job and I just loved this write

I love this poem! i gave it a 5/5. you did an amazing job writing it.

Beautiful piece of poetry... Truly amazing.

5/5

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Amazing job, great flow! 5/5!

I liked this poem, I found the ryhme scheme to be off a little to tell you the truth like yeah you had a ryhme but it seemed to be ryhming in all different places not in one flow. I thought this poem was really sweet though with a beautiful meaning behing it. Well done none the less ~mel