You know, I haven't actually read a haiku poem that long before! I am quite empressed! I love fruits basket, and when I read a poem such as this, I feel very happy! Great job!

Have no clue what Fruit Basket is, but I guess its Manga. I liked the poem. The zodiac connections were great. and i think you had great flow. =]

Amazing! Your poetry impresses me. 5/5