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by broken wings Apr 7, 2007 category : Dark, fantasy / other
Should have known not 2 believe then things might not have been so bad it's true your plan was 2 deceive why does that make me so sad and all along it was me and u but u left me-bound and broken and who should i let heal my heart since death is out-spoken and tears of red fall down my cheeks your blood is here in my shadow now it's my turn to drop the dagger and laugh at the blood on my hands, romeo I've cried to many times to be laughed at and hurt once more so tell me now what can you do As you taste revenge soaked floor
by lost and incomplete
Beautifull ... dark ... chilling
by Lenny
I like it. Just the last line let you down...'As you taste revenge soaked floor' or something along those lines would tie it off deliciously. Great work -Lenny