A girl like me

by So Beautifully Broken   Apr 7, 2007


I`m implusive
i`m paranoid
a horrible sight
take a polaroid.

wearing black eyeliner
scars on my wrists
always wondering
how`d i end up like this

alone in the corner
hood over my head
tears in my eyes
wishing i were dead

at the bottom
ignored in the dark
all these feelings rushing
where do i start ?

its hard to forget
all the things i regret
its so hard to be
a girl like me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Wow this poem is really really sad yet very emotional. I loved the flow of it, it was flawless. I liked the description you used to de4scribe yourself in the first stanza it worked well. i really liked the black eyeliner and how youve described yourself, giving yourself this kinof "Emo" look, yet youve shown the pain your going through in it. To improve i suggest you use more punctuation. Thank you for your comment on my work. keep writing! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by ღ Diamoиd Eyes ღ

    Loved your poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    A nice write, could have some changes, but i liked your flow, nice job.

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