by Once an Angel Apr 7, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Heartache |
by Debbie
A flawless portrayal of how a lost love breaks one's spirit. This Cinquain was written and presented rather well and sound. The overall diction and flow of words were terrific. As a result, on the whole, I give you my props for writing such a fantastic formed poetry. =] |
by Corinne
An apt description |
by Melissa
Very beautifully worded. Depicts heartache in it's most desperate state very well I must say. Excellent cinquain! |