I almost cried reading this poem! Seriously, I thought that your poem showed so much feeling. You have a talent and it takes off in this poem. I loved it to the end. Great job!

Very intense stuff...
You've put a lot of emotion into this piece
5/5
*Gem*

Beautifully presented!..intense...Great job!....i loved it!..kp it up!

I know how that feels. I do it myself. Why must people be so cruel to the ones who matter the most? keep that head up. Just don't give up.

I am in tears right now... This poem actually fits me perfectly! I love it! Keep up the good work!