Oh i didn't want him to die. so with this poem did the girl not like him? you shouldn't want to die tho.

5/5 David

Wow that was amazing it made me so depressed, this was trully an amazing poem, could you read my oh tree poem by any chance

WOW this is so heartfelt and really draws me in. Very well written and potrayed with such sorrow that even the happiest of hearts can feel the prick.

--Sher

Wow is right. This is amazing, it is so interesting, and so wonderful. Though it is sad it still has such beauty. Extremely well written. Deffinatly worthy of 5/5