by LostLikeTearsInRain Apr 7, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
She lays in her room |
by BlueJay
This is the first poem I have ever read that made me cry. Both parts are magnificent. You do have a wonderful talent, and I hope that it will take you somewhere. I am amazed, by this. Good job. I love it |
by jane
Omg so sad.....but very good |
by Collin
Wow. |
by Nicole
OMG *tear* that was sooo sad. but of course good :) U have real talent. |
WOW, i almost started tocry... that was SO sad!! i loved it, it was an amazing write! you have talent alot of talent. Keep writing and i'll look forward to reading. 5/5 definitaly. |