by A Former Outcast Apr 8, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I saw her walking past me, |
This is almost a story in poem form, very well written tale of unrequited love and revenge, though sad, it also has a dark humor to it. However no one is worth dying for, though at some point in life we all feel that way. Great piece. |
by Olorin
Wow I must say this has to be one of the best poems I have read from this site. What an amazing poem!!! It flowed so well and it had such a great message in it to. I know I have felt like this before definitly. A wonderful poem absolutly a 5/5 |
by Ashlee
What the crap!?! that was great!! it brought back some memories.. i really like the way you write this.. well done 5/5 =] |
by xXallieXx
Good job... your poem flows really well! awesome, and plz continue writing |
Reading Your Poem Made Me Cry...None Have Done That In A While...Thanks And Keeps Writing More Masterpeices |