by Kaila
Well sky, |
by firexdancer
This i can relate tooo, you really worked your feeling into the poem in the wording and flow, i think you did a really good job 'cause this is kinda hard to write about, 5/5 |
by Molly
That was good! 5/5 |
by Sara
Omg i loved it!! i could relate to this poem so much, bc one time one of my good friends got a boyfriend, and she totally made me a 3rd wheel... so many people could relate to this poem.. great job... 5/5 from me and thanks for the comment!! |
by Kaila
I know how you feel heres a tip of advice. When they break up and they will, you'll be there to fill her heart back up nice poem |
by lonelynow
I know this feeling well, and I think this is a really good poem. The rhyme scheme helps it give it a certain pace, which I like. |