Wow...I love the way you start of the poem talking about a boy. But somehow in a really cool way you twist your words, and end up revealing the boy as you. And how one poem with only a few stanza's can narrate an event that happend through 13 years. Wow! I like this poem! 5/5^^! |
by isabel
Really touching...sad, but beautiful... |
Great poem!!!-VALERIE 5/5 |
by dora
Hey darl great poem. very powerful. lot of emotion. touching write. xx |
Woah... strong... |
by Teria
It made me want to cry. The wording and emotions were perfect. Along with the flow and rhyme scheme. You did a wonderful job with this poem. |