Your Games

by Tammie   Apr 8, 2007


You have your girlfriend, isn't she enough?
My broken heart doesn't want this, it's too tough
Talking till early in the morning, sun almost rising
We haven't done this in so long, it's surprising

Is there something you want?
Are you alone again?
This is just plain torture
I can't put up with this pain

I sit here smiling, as you watch with deceitful eyes
Telling me you love me, I say to you 'please don't lie'
Continue your convincing, just not with me
What we once had you lost, it just cannot be

Every other night
I'm hardly your friend
Now you want something
Don't play pretend

I had a great night of talking; I've missed it a lot
But don't play your games, I know the plot
I gave in this time, but I now know my mistake
This time I learnt though, and my heart doesn't ache.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hi babe :) how u doin? great i hope *smiles*

    well that was well done and i just read or other new one. great work sweetie!! you've defenitly improved since I last read your poems.

    i really like how you talk about relaitable issues. keep it up :)

    *hugs*

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, that was so sad hunny. The flow was good, the descriptions detailed, and the emotion loud and clear. Very inspirational as well. Very nicely done hun. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    I love this one. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it. Great choice of words, and a lot of description. Awesome job.

    Thanks for the comment by the way. I'll keep it in mind. :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Comment #2

    I take it this is a poem speaking from experience..

    "I had a great night of talking; I've missed it a lot
    But don't play your games, I know the plot"

    I know how that is.. and we girls are sometimes too stupid to see through the lies. I made that mistake, i hope you're smarter
    This poem implies you are =)

    The stucture and flow was great and the topic is one that many can relate to and sympathise with
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Awh. This is sad, but I like it. Very nicely written. I like the first stanza the best. Very nice job.

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