Oh tammie. i know this is the convo between you and your ex. but what i find very moving is that you know about wat you did. how all he is doing is hurting you. lying to you. don't take it and next time show him it!

5/5 David

Greatly written, I liked it a lot.
The Angel of Secrets

Awh. This is sad, but I like it. Very nicely written. I like the first stanza the best. Very nice job.

Comment #2

I take it this is a poem speaking from experience..

"I had a great night of talking; I've missed it a lot
But don't play your games, I know the plot"

I know how that is.. and we girls are sometimes too stupid to see through the lies. I made that mistake, i hope you're smarter
This poem implies you are =)

The stucture and flow was great and the topic is one that many can relate to and sympathise with
5/5
*Gem*

I love this one. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it. Great choice of words, and a lot of description. Awesome job.

Thanks for the comment by the way. I'll keep it in mind. :]

Awh, that was so sad hunny. The flow was good, the descriptions detailed, and the emotion loud and clear. Very inspirational as well. Very nicely done hun. 5/5

Hi babe :) how u doin? great i hope *smiles*

well that was well done and i just read or other new one. great work sweetie!! you've defenitly improved since I last read your poems.

i really like how you talk about relaitable issues. keep it up :)

*hugs*