by amanda flood Apr 8, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Listen to me |
This is a really well put to together poem. keep up the good work |
by David
Oh yes. this so far today is the best poem i have read! it was so just, just awesome! |
by Gem
I agree with ^^ |
by Alison
This is so sad, but it tells a story of a mother grieving and wanting her husband to do better i think. good job =] 5/5 |
Very nice poem, 5/5 i can relate to your poem my mother had a similar cry but my father let her down very nice poem and thanks for the comment. |