Very nice poem, 5/5 i can relate to your poem my mother had a similar cry but my father let her down very nice poem and thanks for the comment.

This is so sad, but it tells a story of a mother grieving and wanting her husband to do better i think. good job =] 5/5

I agree with ^^

It's a very sad piece that tells a tale of mother just wanting things to be put right.
Very emotive
5/5
*Gem*

Oh yes. this so far today is the best poem i have read! it was so just, just awesome!

5/5 David

This is a really well put to together poem. keep up the good work