Help me

by amanda flood   Apr 8, 2007


I feel weak to my knee's
its pulling me down
this thing called emotion
is running me down

its messing with my heart
and playing with my head
they tell my thing's
that i don't want to believe

help it to stop
for i don't want to die
i want to go one
and live like before

take the words
out of my head
and let my heart heal
go back to the way it use to be

for i am not living
in this crazy messed up body
cause they tell me things
that lead me far far away

i want to go
and leave this world
cause nobody can help me
with this feeling called insecurity

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jeff

    One one side this is the great poem,I loved it.
    On the helping side,you just have to choose to ignore all the emotions that are meant to destroy you.Focus on the positives and u shall be fine.

  • 17 years ago

    by tinna

    I liked this poem, i really love it when ppl put so much feeling in to one poem, its a tallent! keepup the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by chavii

    This is really a superb poem , the emotions run real high.Good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lithium

    You pinpointed this emotion well, now all you need to do is write a poem telling us how to overcome it like you shall do soon enough.

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    So many of us feel sad in our daily life but not all of us could express the way you did here. Very nicely written indeed

    all the best and take care

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