So many of us feel sad in our daily life but not all of us could express the way you did here. Very nicely written indeed |
by Lithium
You pinpointed this emotion well, now all you need to do is write a poem telling us how to overcome it like you shall do soon enough. |
by chavii
This is really a superb poem , the emotions run real high.Good work. |
by tinna
I liked this poem, i really love it when ppl put so much feeling in to one poem, its a tallent! keepup the good work! |
by Jeff
One one side this is the great poem,I loved it. |