Wow! absolutely amazing..
You put her on this pedestal;
A spotlight, so high up there.
As you whispered sweet little nothings,
As if you really cared.
deinately my favourite verse!! a job well done..a great begining with a perfect finish..keep up the good work :)
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WOWEEE! Ciao, Hun...You have talent! I can't express this enough to you haha, I absolutely LOVED this poem, why I haven't voted & commented on it before now is beyond me haha, but really...this poem truly explained how I feel half the time with my queerbag lmao, and how so many other girls feel...i love this! So much I want to cry out of JEALOUSY! Tehee.

ifcukingheartchuuu.

OMG Ciao!! That was absoultely wonderful... it does a really really spectaular job of describing what it feels like to be broken up with... It's perfect!! It's AWESOME!! As always!! ^_^ 5/5 for sure

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.