Be a rebel beautiful.

Let the right be wrong,
Let the weak be strong,
Let the light seep in,
Let the stars shine during the day.
^ I think it would sound better as
Let the right be wrong,
the weak be strong.
Let the light seep in,
And, stars shine during the day.

'I'm gonna break away,
And fly away.'
^ away is used twice in the same stanza.

I liked this poem, it had GREAT meaning, and was amazing. If this is how you feel [ some write poems about others feelings] I wish you the best of luck. :]
There just a few MINOR things with it.
And, that's even my opinion, others might disagree. :]
Great work, hun.
Keep it up.
4/5