by Sherry Lynn Apr 9, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
Leap of Faith |
Wow, what an emotionally wonderful write. I loved the way you have worded this. The structure was good and as always I enjoyed reading. Just one hint of advice, loose the caps within the poem, I think that ruined the feel of it for me more than anything. But overall this was an outstanding poem. |
Aww soo sweet.. and so caring ... your poem is soo descriptive and I love it.. you are a talented writer and I hope you never forget that.. Good job and keep up the good work!! 5/5 |
by debbylyn
I really enjoyed reading this powerful poem of faith and hope things are ok for you and your family. well done. 5/5 |
by Edward D Zurovec
Hope lies in the Faith of Hearts. This so reminds me of my childhood,things I seen my mother go through, trying to keep a Family together. Tis not for the weak and in the word remain strong. Peace and Blessings |
by Cindy
Sherry |