Lover's Walk (Contest)

by Kurt   Apr 9, 2007


We stroll along through the trees
Our hands clasped together
I know we are thinking the same thing,
"I wish this would last forever"

The grass beneath our feet
Slowly shifts to sand
We continue our conversation
Ignoring the difference in the land

We continue our journey
Through the forest park
Holding hands and laughing
Until the world goes dark

The winding path disappears
Leading us to rugged brush
You say "I think we are lost"
And you start to blush

Once again the trail is found
Yet we begin to move aside
Our lips met for moments
With passion not denied

Then you pull me along
And continue to talk
I realize that our stroll
Has become a lover's walk

© Kurt Hampton 2007

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  • 17 years ago

    by BlessedByAnAngel

    So beautiful, great imagery in this piece.. so sweet, wonderful write!

    "Then you pull me along
    And continue to talk
    I realize that our stroll
    Has become a lover's walk"

    Beautiful. Love that stanza the most, keep it up ^^

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    I absolutely loved this.
    Amazing write. <3

    "The winding path disappears
    Leading us to rugged brush
    You say "I think we are lost"
    And you start to blush

    Once again the trail is found
    Yet we begin to move aside
    Our lips met for moments
    With passion not denied

    Then you pull me along
    And continue to talk
    I realize that our stroll
    Has become a lover's walk"
    ^ Best part.

    Those three stanzas brought back so many memories.
    This poems easily related to.
    Probably why it's so great, others can feel the emotion along with yourself.
    :D

  • 17 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    I love it

  • 17 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Sweet and calm. reminds me of the gentle days with one of my exes. it wass really wonderful, those kinds of days, deffinitly the kind you wish could last forever. love that line. use it alot in my own poetry:) thanks fort the comments again, i'm glad you understand my poetry.

  • 17 years ago

    by Run out of words

    Aw...simple and cute. I just came back from the beach, and it reminds me a lot of my time there. I liked the poem, not too complicated but not bland. Just perfect.

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