One last goodbye

by The Lonely Rose   Apr 9, 2007


Come with me,
Take my knife.
Kill me with pride
Kill me with all your might..

What is there to live for i don't know.
For should have I let my pain to have shown?
You hurt me too much already.
It's so unbearable.
Without even a goodbye,
With even my sacrifice,
A fake promise,
A real promise,
With no goodbye..

Take it in your hand,
Grasp it tight,
Stab here,
And stab it right,
Don't back down.
Don't let me live...
Let the blade fly,
Let the pain grow
And let me bleed,
Till no more..

Back down if you will but a secret promise is made,
Once you say goodbye,
I will die.
Something will happen to me
And I will become no more...
Just one last goodbye is all I need to end all of this pain...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    This kinda feels really free style with quite a bit of thoughts coming through. Liked it but it's not great. Some cool lines and the words actually goes well with it. I'm not usually into some pieces like this but I find I made an exception.
    ~Faith-less

  • 17 years ago

    by Nicole

    5/5. do you really feel like this hun. the poem is amazing but it worries me to see you feel this way.

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