by Hatori
This was beautifully written, Joe. The emotion was true and I was wondering, did you write it for the person who wrote a comment before me? You used an excellent choice of words, and the description worked well. My favorite part was: |
by Sherry Lynn
This poems is very loving. It is good to see that you are finding such love and compassion. A great dedication to Elisabetta. |
by Cyma Khan
So much love for a dear friend...must say she u both r lucky to have eachother as a friend. |
by David
I got on another computer just to comment on this poem. excellent work joe. |
by Goran Rahim
This is another great job by you, i like the emotion in it, how you appriciate someone, in fact i can relate to this poem as awhile ago i left a comment in a poem which was angel type poem also, once in my life i was going through a hard time when someone took my side and walk sise by side with me and she helped me overcome the hard time in my life, for me she is an angel who s sent from the above, |
by Marjan
This made me smile =) |
by Sweet lig
Ohh its quite touch.. its kinda have a great structure.. actually at the end it make me smile heheh5/5 |
by Alesia
That was just so beautiful! She is very lucky to have someone like you around. I can't even put this poem into words. It just touched me so much. Fantastic job, and really well penned. |
by Darci
It was so beautiful. you are such a great writer. this definately is one of my favorites. Well done! |
Beautiful poem!....loved it!...veryt sweet poem!..well penned! |
-.- Why It did that I will never know. Lol Written really well and i loved it. Keep it up Joe. 5/5 |
by Wallace
Excellent poem superbly done. It was a joy to read from start to finish, love it, keep it up. |
by Alex
Very nice, it's beautiful. 5/5 |
by RachiBubbles
This is absolutly amazing i love it. good write :-) actually excelent write:-) |
by Anonymous
Sounds like you're whipped. Jk. Good poem, she must be special. |
Wow this was so sweet. its amazing how much joy can emerge out of a single friendship and it just amazes me as well how important they are in our lives, without our friends we are nothing, for they are the ones that always have our backs no matter what. And from your poem I can tell that you have a very good friend with you. Keep a close grip on her because friends like that come around once in a lifetime. Amazing job on the poem, you made it sound so sweet without sounding overly mushy and cheese, which is very hard to do sometimes because there is a thin line. Well done I really loved this one. |