Comments : Angel Face

  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    This was beautifully written, Joe. The emotion was true and I was wondering, did you write it for the person who wrote a comment before me? You used an excellent choice of words, and the description worked well. My favorite part was:

    Her eyes sparkling with such joy
    And her walk graceful as can be
    She'll always speak her mind
    With her voice so soft and free

    So touching! Heh, Great job :D!
    Hatori

  • 17 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    This poems is very loving. It is good to see that you are finding such love and compassion. A great dedication to Elisabetta.

    In the last verse, first line.. I think it would be better if you said an "ounce" insead of "once". Just merely a thought babe.

    Good Job!

    --Sher

  • 17 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    So much love for a dear friend...must say she u both r lucky to have eachother as a friend.

    Greatly done!!

    God bless u

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    I got on another computer just to comment on this poem. excellent work joe.

    i know you are talented but this goes on more. excellent in every way.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is another great job by you, i like the emotion in it, how you appriciate someone, in fact i can relate to this poem as awhile ago i left a comment in a poem which was angel type poem also, once in my life i was going through a hard time when someone took my side and walk sise by side with me and she helped me overcome the hard time in my life, for me she is an angel who s sent from the above,
    great job sir, i like your poems alot

  • 17 years ago

    by Marjan

    This made me smile =)
    this made me think of the friends I myself have :) Life is beautiful. I wish everybody knew that *sigh*
    what happiness greater than seeing people being friends with each other?
    this made me smile.
    thanks for the smile Joe and Happy Birthday! =)
    Marjan

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Ohh its quite touch.. its kinda have a great structure.. actually at the end it make me smile heheh5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Alesia

    That was just so beautiful! She is very lucky to have someone like you around. I can't even put this poem into words. It just touched me so much. Fantastic job, and really well penned.

  • 17 years ago

    by Darci

    It was so beautiful. you are such a great writer. this definately is one of my favorites. Well done!

    -darci

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful poem!....loved it!...veryt sweet poem!..well penned!
    Tk care!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    -.- Why It did that I will never know. Lol Written really well and i loved it. Keep it up Joe. 5/5
    Check mine out please

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem superbly done. It was a joy to read from start to finish, love it, keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Alex

    Very nice, it's beautiful. 5/5

    ~*Alex*~

  • 17 years ago

    by RachiBubbles

    This is absolutly amazing i love it. good write :-) actually excelent write:-)
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous

    Sounds like you're whipped. Jk. Good poem, she must be special.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow this was so sweet. its amazing how much joy can emerge out of a single friendship and it just amazes me as well how important they are in our lives, without our friends we are nothing, for they are the ones that always have our backs no matter what. And from your poem I can tell that you have a very good friend with you. Keep a close grip on her because friends like that come around once in a lifetime. Amazing job on the poem, you made it sound so sweet without sounding overly mushy and cheese, which is very hard to do sometimes because there is a thin line. Well done I really loved this one.