Lost Immortal

by The Queen of Spades   Apr 9, 2007


The days passing by make it seem like an eternity
Trapped in a hole that keeps me from the ability
To go on with joy, to continue to fight and breathe
A light inside me that now I no longer see

But I will wait for
You forever more

Lost immortal
Dead to me
Bring me back
To your reverie
Lost immortal
Rest in peace
Let me go
Let me be

Winter too cold, heat I am unable to bear
Justice in pain that I do not believe is fair
Hearts can be sewn but simply persist to tear
Walking through the void and pretending that I don't care

But I will wait for
You forever more

Lost immortal
Dead to me
Bring me back
To your reverie
Lost immortal
Rest in peace
Let me go
Let me be

Lost immortal
Pain to me
I want you to breathe
Back the life into me

Lost immortal
Dead in peace
Let me go
Please remember me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I think you have all the right elements and such in the song. It flows nicely and when sung in ones mind it actually flows well and the chorus is good and very nicely written.

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Really good poem. Don't really know what to exactly say tho. 5/5