by XXXrusted silverXXXwas nvr good enough to be goldXXX Apr 9, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Breaking into a thousand pieces, |
by Teria
Once again. you gave a wonderful beginning and end. Along, with the rest of the poem, but those two stanzas brought it all together. |
by Kristina
Aww this is really sad, but i enjoyed reading it a lot! it was just simply wonderfully written! 5/5 |
Very, very nice! |
Wow. Your rhyme scheme was perfect. It flowed so well. I really enjoyed reading it. And thank you for ready my poem. 5/5 |