Loosing our own Battle

by XXXrusted silverXXXwas nvr good enough to be goldXXX   Apr 9, 2007


Breaking into a thousand pieces,
As the world falls and stumbles,
Detaching myself from reality,
As society around me crumbles.

Storms gather and lightening strikes,
The existence of man turns stale,
Watching tornadoes sweep through nations,
As the meaning of life becomes pale.

Getting caught up in a hurricane,
Of so many lies and endless deceits,
The wind screams of victims turmoil,
Plagues sweep through the streets.

Engulfed in a tsunami of agony,
Dreams die and hope turns black,
Lives sacrificed to its suffocation,
To be lost and never come back.

Trying to focus on a bright spot,
That's no longer there,
It was wiped away by the darkness,
That made this life so unfair.

We broke the rules of our father,
When we turned this planet cold,
Now we must suffer the consequences,
While our actions around us unfold.

The minds of our people are perverse,
False deeds out weigh our right,
Distress we brought on our own selves,
When we chose to loose our own fight.

We took what we had for granted,
God gave and we threw away,
This once enchanted existance,
Now with our own lives we pay.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    Once again. you gave a wonderful beginning and end. Along, with the rest of the poem, but those two stanzas brought it all together.
    I love that in poems <3
    Great job, once again sweetie.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww this is really sad, but i enjoyed reading it a lot! it was just simply wonderfully written! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Very, very nice!
    It wasn't cliche at all, very unique! I loved it.

    The imagery was great, the flow pretty good, and the wording wonderful.

    The best one yet.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    Wow. Your rhyme scheme was perfect. It flowed so well. I really enjoyed reading it. And thank you for ready my poem. 5/5

    Tina

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