Wow. Your rhyme scheme was perfect. It flowed so well. I really enjoyed reading it. And thank you for ready my poem. 5/5

Tina

Very, very nice!
It wasn't cliche at all, very unique! I loved it.

The imagery was great, the flow pretty good, and the wording wonderful.

The best one yet.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

Aww this is really sad, but i enjoyed reading it a lot! it was just simply wonderfully written! 5/5

~Kristina

Once again. you gave a wonderful beginning and end. Along, with the rest of the poem, but those two stanzas brought it all together.
I love that in poems <3
Great job, once again sweetie.
5/5