Very good imagery and also a good vocabulary but i think it was the choice of words that was so effective, well done it seemed to flow and almost roll xx

Jeannie
I know this is a sad poem but it is so much of the feelings I have...Excellent job!

The moon and stars have left me here
A vacant night sees fallen tears
And though the heartache needs release
No form of help has come to me.

I have had John on my mind all day.
This verse really got to me. Great job!
Love Cindy

Aweh! I really liked that. There was something in it that really stood out for me, your vocabulary is just amazing Dear, I do believe that I am truly learning something from you by reading your work, haha. =)

THIS IS DEEP....VERY INTERESTING!!!! WELL WRITTEN

A joy to read this sad poem. It has a perfect flow and rhyme to it. The emotions are pouring out of every line...

From day to day I tread along
The lonely roads less traveled on
And if by chance I choose to sleep
In between is where I'll be.

The last verse sums it all up so well....5/5 All the best, Debbie

That was amazing, the flow was perfect, good job, you just went into my fav's.

Best Wishes
Wallace

I loved this this poem...i could feel what you were saying and feeling in it....this poem is so much a "5/5" no one can disagree.
Samantha

Oh this is simply wonderful work! I was compelled to comment on this. You really have an exceptional talent!

Magnifcently written well worded poem, the flow was smooth, stayed on track, all in all i thought it was a great read, keep up the good work.

Your poem was amazing-the verse i found the most meaningful :

"No soul can live within the grasp
No song to sing, it fades too fast
Which leaves me stuck with pain I've seen
With just a glance of in between."

You may or may not be a christian, but I am here to tell you that god loves you and he is the soul within the grasp!

beautiful piece of poetry mind

take care xxx

This is awesome and i sang it in several ways and it works!!! i would like to ask you if i may sing this in my band and i will obvs say that you are the writer and it will be recorded and i will send you it maybe :) messege back
TINSLEY -x-X-x-

I really like your poem..the words just flow so effortlessly..I love it!!! It is amazing!!