Comments : Who Am I ?

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley Koper

    It stops and makes you think. it mad me think who i am and i want to be loved and love the people who i talk to

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    ^ Yes, I thought so...

    Reading this piece reminds me of a famous poetess' astonishing works. 'Tis simply written, whereas having a deeper and profound meaning by reading between the lines. I was rendered speechless on the parts: "I am a child...", "I am a rebel..." and "I am a dreamer..." because I can correlate with its Raison d'�ªtre: to love and be loved. =]
    My real pleasure to read this wonderful piece. Thanks for sharing. Keep on writing what you feel and like. all the best and take care.
    Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Becca

    I love this poem! i can relate to all the things. i also really like the ending, because it makes total sense 5/5.. keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    5/5.Beautifully penned your true self and the universal self.Keep it up.