Good poem....i think this should be more of the sad section but hey ur call....

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Wow.
A very powerful and emotional poem. Beautiful, yet heartbreaking to read. The flow was flawless, the word usage was amazing, and the emotions were strong. A wonderful poem about a first love, keep writing! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Good poem, i liked it... says a lot... 5/5