Comments : I shall believe ( Club Contest)

  • 17 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    It is always great to find hope and to believe once more after falling from loves wings.

    --Sher

  • 17 years ago

    by chavii

    This is good one , i like the theme ,the hope to rise again .5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley

    I love how in the two poems i have red of yours you talk about the best....kinda sad but you recoverd ....nice

    Ashley

  • 17 years ago

    by monika

    Very nice poem! 5/5 i can relate to it! keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    Good, honest, and well said. I like that the poem changes from a relitively good mood to a slightly darker one.

  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is fantastic great job on it and thx for the comment on my peom and for your input on your idea of it thx and good job!!!

    keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Oh so much love and devotion. i loved this poem. i guess you would have won the contest. with a poem like that you surely should have.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Miranda HEARTCORE

    I love it, it brings hope, blah blah. I love it basically. 100/5

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nicely done for our competition! Your writing is really improving!

    But I have stayed down long enough
    Now my love its time for me to stand
    You think you've brought me down
    Now I will show you
    My sadness has only made me stronger
    I shall believe once again

    Love this verse....uplifting and hopeful! Well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Omg that is so cute. Very well written, great flow and very inspirational, hope I spelled that right lol. I really enjoyed readin it. Anyways great poem! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Forsaken

    This is a very special poem. It has such emotion and heart and soul put into it. I like it very much. Great work. And thanks for the comment.

  • 17 years ago

    by Noel

    Aww, I love this! Reading it kinda makes me feel happy. It's very hopeful. Great job =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Lyndsy

    I liked this one a lot! It gives hope to people who have had their hearts broken. I like that it ends on a strong note.