Wow that is a very good poem. I love the way it rhymes...5/5 keep it up.

Wow.... thats so sweet. im sure so many people could relate to this poem. i liked the rhyming, especially the second stanza. the "live" and "die" comparison was absolutely beautiful. great job. 5/5

Good poem. The flow was off a bit. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this.
Keep it up 5/5

So sweet and deep...I liked the rhyme and wording
Especially those were cool

I've been through so much heart break,
none of it was fun,
wondering if you'd be different,
just hoping you'll be the one.

Keep it up
Have a nice day
Laura