Whoa! An emotional and heart-wrenching poem. Even though it didn't rhyme, it still brought to the life a story... Sad, but well done! 5/5

Ciao~

Omg, im freaking out right now, the poem was good, the flow was off, but the story lit through. I'm freaking out because I can relate to this poem more than I ever thought I could. 5/5

-Liz

I loved this poem, Your right about the flow being off but it still showed a beautifully sad story behind. Well done with this poem you did a great job bringing this poem to life. ~mel

I love your idea and how you protrayed this poem and the nightmare lived behind it. you wrote this peice quite precise for what its like to live this nightmare, great poem keep it up ur wonderful xox

Its not very often im at a loss for words but this is one of the times i am.... all i can say is screw flow screw rhyme your story was touching emotional and so well done i cant even begin to explain

Hey that was an eye-opening piece, very well written. keep up the great writing!

Wow, long but so sad and full of emotion that you portrayed that this little girl has. Very nicely done! Thank you commenteing and rating my poem. God Bless 5/5
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Definitely feels dark and sad at the same time! 5/5

Very good poem deep , but i loved it , great job 5/5 keep up the good work. I'm glad to see someone else letting it out, makes me feel better about what i'm doing ,,,,,,,Tracy