Huh, doom in the end, i like this poem but i believe how we die is our doom or light. Nice poem 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

This was rather interesting.. but to me this is a dark poem...
And you might wanna change saviour to saviours since u did use demons (plural)
Other then that it was a good poem and a very interesting view on things

take care and keep writing=D

This is a dark but still a good poem keenan, a few grammer mistakes, like capitalization and periods and commas but this is still a very good poem, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

This poem is very interesting I loved it Thanks for the comment on "Window peeker"