by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG Apr 9, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Red and blue colored the empty street, |
by isabel
Wonderful poem... |
by Kurt
This poem had great flow and the rhyming scheme was well executed. The first stanza's last line was a bit out of place. It seemed like it was placed there to force the rhyme. Othere than that the only other suggestion i have is that woman and been don't rhyme and are the only parts really keeping the flow from being perfect. Still, this was brilliantly written and easily a 5/5. |
by Bryan
This is perhaps one of the best poems ive read of yours, the ending stanza sends chills up my back!! wish i could give it a higher vote than 5!!! keep it up!!! |
by aDORKable x3
Great job Jenna! You entered this for the contest... I had to back out. Really sad story... |