Great job Jenna! You entered this for the contest... I had to back out. Really sad story...
Fav line:
The remainder of a love she left behind.

just sounded really poetic!
keep it up hun!

Ciao~

This is perhaps one of the best poems ive read of yours, the ending stanza sends chills up my back!! wish i could give it a higher vote than 5!!! keep it up!!!

This poem had great flow and the rhyming scheme was well executed. The first stanza's last line was a bit out of place. It seemed like it was placed there to force the rhyme. Othere than that the only other suggestion i have is that woman and been don't rhyme and are the only parts really keeping the flow from being perfect. Still, this was brilliantly written and easily a 5/5.

Wonderful poem...

*isabel*