I really know how you feel, I loved your poem but moving on is the best 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

I love the last stanza of it....great poem. 5/5

xo becca xo

HEYY omg that was SOOO good. it was about ur ex right? well yeah if ur bf doesnt trust u than it's not gunna work. cuz everytime you hug a guy he'll get all defensive and pissed off. and u know guys with their stupid temper jealousy problems lol. but....anyways lol good for you. just make sure ur not gunna have any regrets. cuz it's gunna kill you ten years from now if you do.

c/b
melody

I love this poem, i can really feel the emotion, and it has a great flow, overall great poem, 5/5 keep up the good work!

Beautiful but sad poem. I really like it 5/5

This is an excellent poem but work on your syllable matching.. like match your syllables with the following line that rhymes =] constructive cristism 4 stars <3

Wow... that poem really hit me.. I just went through a messy break up, because I liked him so much.. and he ended it, and it hurts that I've lost a friend, and all the memories eat away at me inside.. It's a wonderful poem... so emotional.. 5/5

.:Danielle:.

That was good 5/5 for me thanx 4 the comments

Hi sara nice poem

Thought it was really great
5/5

I thought it was wonderful! 5/5 from me for sure! :D

Ya i am doin pretty good too... anywayz itz a good think that u guys r still friends.. well my life is goin great and everything!! wow it has been a long time since we talked!! lol

AND! Thank you again for your new comment. This poem too hits hard because it really REALLY goes along with one of my relationships, pretty much hits it on target. Good stuff. And if you are looking at my other new poems, don't be too disturbed by the Pt. 1.5 it's just something that came to my mind lol I have no idea.

Being hated surely hurts but being ignored...God! could there be anything worse? :(
hope you're feeling better now Sara,
Marjan

Although this poem is painfully tragic and sad, i think it helps show that you have to move on, cuz you couldn't have gone on like that. i liked how this poem flowed, well done

Yayy sara i luv it!

<3
NATALIE

This poem was so sad.
i just love the way you have written it.
i can relate to it very well.

I wanted to let you know
that I loved you with everything I had
and you let it all go somehow
and I'm really sad
that this had to end this way
a great relationship down the drain
So I just wanted to say
I never have felt so much pain

i just love this stanza.
very strong.
5/5
keep up the good work
best wishes
and take care
emmeline

Hewow u.I just wanna say that I like this poem the most cause i know what you felt when you wrote it....Congratulations.you have done a great work.Best redards,Michelle XxXx

I totally understand the pain in this poem, there's no pain like a heartbreak and it never gets any easier I promise. Amazing job 5/5 GG23

"We're over, we're through
No more me with you
We're done that's it
I didn't want this to end, not one bit"

^^
that is my favourite part. yet sad but very well written. this poem has a lot of meaning and as it is sad it still is very good. it shows a lot of emotion. very well written. keep the good work up.
5/5

chelsea
xoxo