Very nice poem. sad and the emotion was felt.

i hope your still watch lovingly

in this line you may want to change "watch" to "watching" for better grammer.

i think you did a great job on this poem. I can relate to lots of your poems. 5/5 keep up the great work =)

Thanks for the comment

Take Care. =)

You feel what we all feel.
and you've written it down really well.
Well Done!

Marjan

Aw james, a beautiful poem, so sad. i hope theyre in a better place now babe, xox Greta