Wow. Hun. Amazing.
It was intense. The flow was flawless, emotions were strong and clear, and the word usage was amazing.

"Though the scars may fade, from contact with the blade,
It is deep they have grazed, in the heart they've laid.
And the marks they've made, with tears they are weighed,
Where they began, they have stayed. This is the price she has paid."

^ Oh my gosh. That stanza was amazing! Couldn't get any better. Mostly because I relate the most right there. Your poem is so much better than mine, I don't know what you're talking about. =] Fantastic job hun! 5/5 Keep writing.

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Wow...great poem. Very strong emotions actually. It was very nicely done I can relate to this one more than the others and I love it.

Comment #3

Wow, using life as a metaphor for a real being was an excellent idea, it gave this piece so much more feeling to it.
And you've done an excellent job with the vocab, the rhyme scheme had a habit of changing throughout the poem but those are errors that are easily overlooked
Excellent piece
5.5
*Gem*

Though the scars may fade, from contact with the blade,
It is deep they have grazed, in the heart they've laid.
And the marks they've made, with tears they are weighed,
Where they began, they have stayed. This is the price she has paid

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That stanza was definitly the best i found it to be amazing. The flow was really good this poem seemed to flow great throughout it and your word choice good. Well done with this an amazing piece of work right here.~mel

Yup, i knew hun lol such a good poem im surprised your notm ore noticed on the site you should show off your poem lol theyre really good :d

xxxx alex xxx

Amazing write! I don't like to read long poems but it just kept me reading really enjoyed it. Loved how you used you as life. Really touching for me.
Keep up the amazing work!
5/5